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  中需要大家讨论的题目还是很多的,那么在新托福写作中大家如何积累一些好用的素材呢?下面的托福写作辅导就为大家介绍一下关于高薪低薪如何选择的问题。

  托福写作辅导之高薪低薪如何选择

  A job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a

快乐8网站  high salary but less vacation time. 是否同意低薪假期多的工作比高薪假期少的工作好?

  点评:A 和 B 对比写法

  原创经典范文赏析:

  首段:个性开篇 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场

  Indeed, the proportion of people’s life spent doing such jobs is very high.

  So feelings about one's job must mirror how an individual feels about his or her

快乐8网站  life, thus, job satisfaction is very significant for people’s happiness. One of

  the traits of modern way of working is that people enjoy more freedom in

  selecting jobs. People differ greatly in their views as to which job is more

  commendable, a job with less vacation time but comfortable salary, or a career

  with more flexible time but low pay. As I see it, both of them all have its pros

  and cons, yet, a job with comfortable salary deserve more praises.

  点评:…… deserve more praises 值得更多的赞美

  二段:第一次支持作家立场以及细节展开

  For a start,a trend is that nowadays a great many people are often willing

快乐8网站  sacrifice freedom for the purpose of having a well-paid salary. More precisely,

  many people associate job satisfaction with the number on their pay cheque. They

快乐8网站  may take their salary as a symbol of how much they are valued by the

  organizations they work for and how excellent their performance is. Little

快乐8网站  wonder that a poll taken by China Daily found that most people believed that

  they could enjoy superior material comfort as well as creating good quality of

  life if they can take up handsomely paid jobs.

快乐8网站  点评:take up = embark on 从事……

  三段:第一次支持作家立场以及细节展开:叔叔保罗创业的故事

  The debate reminds me of my Uncle Paul, who is an entrepreneur by embarking

  on self-employment. A decade ago, my uncle had a stable career, namely, a civil

  servant, more freedom and meager salary is the feature of his career. However,

  his life always felt empty and he was fed up with his former job. After careful

快乐8网站  consideration, my uncle hardened his heart to carve out his own career,

快乐8网站  currently, he lives his life to the full, he always get his hands full and have

  limited free time at his own disposal. However, the sense of happiness and

  fulfillment gradually grows on him. All these happened to prove a fact that a

  well-paid job is superior to a career which has a meager salary.

  点评:His life feels empty 他感到生活很空虚。

快乐8网站  点评:he lives his life to the full. 他的生活很充实。

  四段:让步段:让步低薪自由的工作的优点+再加以反驳

快乐8网站  Granted, I confess that a job with more freedom is never without its

  merits. An argument hold by some people is that having a long vacation can give

  one person a desirable way to relax and enjoy the pleasure of life. Traveling

快乐8网站  around the globe, doing what one’s heart really desires or accompanying the

  family members could all serve as perfect examples. Nonetheless, I want to

快乐8网站  refute that low-wage jobs also means that one falls into financial difficulties

快乐8网站  and thus fails to secure a stable life.

  尾段:

  In a nutshell,my standpoint is that the option of career should be given to

快乐8网站  every individual, for the aspirations of life differ greatly. However, it is an

  ideal option that one could struggle for economic reward even at the expense of

快乐8网站  sacrificing personal freedom.

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